Antigone Cadmus

9/10. Yay fot rhymes!

Congratulations. ha! Out of all of the names you guessed, one was real! 美空

No. Way. Ever. Ick. Sorry. I don't know what you seem like...hmmm... Something old...like Bernadette...

You seem like a Lizzy.

10/10 You=pretty XD

You definetly aren't a bad writer. However, it is my absolute pet-peeve when people write like Charles Dickens, so my critique might not be the nicest :) Before passing the ...

I hate Dickens as well. His style is much to dense and flowery. The narrative is very dry. I read Jonathan Swift and I found him more modern! (he's from ...

The funny things is, I have posted chapter one, but people only critique this! XD Everyone tells me to post more... I did, but you won't read it. :) Anyway, ...

Reuben!!! :D

I swear I will critique this later, but right now this is waaay too long to do a review. From what I read it is pretty good, but when I ...

Well also, someone (I shall cover their name though none of you know them), thinks that just because 'we'll never completely get rid of abortion', that we should stop trying ...

SummerGirl: You gave us no reasons for your choices. Fine, you hate Bill Clinton. But why? You like Bush, why? I agree with Lukas on the Obama comments. Anti-life? That ...

Okay, I'm just wondering if you're using real names here. You shouldn't use real names unless you've gotten those people's consent. If I was writing a non-fiction piece about my ...

Shiba Inu! So cute :) What's your favorite candy bar?

This is a good start. Hope this critique is helpful! Eric threw a rock at her window the rain was pouring and he knew that her parents wouldn't let him ...